i think it adds to the suspense

therd music : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c2pL44uOKWk

TEAM FORTRESS TWO : AN FAN STORTY

:::Johny the engeer:.:

Jhnny looked in teh sky and said: some day i build RED spaecship that make the team go up and
attac the enemys form up. Marty the friend solider said to Johny: your great egner but i think
POicjh thinkking too much up your head. You musht go and make teh sentriguns to defend ourselves and
our intergence. Johtny locked at the ground and a terar come down. He alwasy wanted to be a space
builder but he just cud maek sentris for save the team. Johnty was said.
Then the firend spie, Marcuss, said to Johny that he was best engiser ever, and thet he built
spaceship in second if he liked to. Johnyy built a spaceship then with the help of his teamates.
When the spacehsip was a bout to luanch in the speace, Marccus remove the disgunse : he was
enemi spie!!! He saped the spaceshop and ran aways like he was scout.

Tobe constinued.

Plase, your the best gbook writer i've ever saw.
Your stoires are full of clever dialoges and really intersting persons.

Doom repercusions of evil is pretty good becase of the ending, witch is very complex and inovative.

I thakn you for the storis you made!!!

Pleease make more sorties, I will bought your ebok soon.

Thank for reading

- SuperV

P.S. and tehn jonh was a zombie