Comuter Virus = Brilliant

[CaptainTrips]

I simply adore this story. Everything was so freaking quotable, but I nailed it down to my two favorite passages:

"We need to take my one ways trip to San Francisco" Jerry said and
pulled out a gun "so lets make it express."
"Where did you get those gun?" surprised Sheila.
"When your father is acop you can unlock a lots of problems."

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So suddenly there was a earthquake and the doctor Calrmo drop the
siring and it land in his leg "OH NO I INFECTED WITH MY OWN VIRUS"
Jerry said "Here is the antivirus" and shot him in the head deadly.
Sheila crazied. "They security took your gun!"
"That was fakes gun I kept the real one hidden just in have to."

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Anyway, is there a chance this'll be posted on FictionPress so that it can be enjoyed on a grander scale?